Comments on Senlin's entry by Nicodemus Yu

With regards to your entry, what i feel is generally you are just listing out the examples. What is lacking is the ideas which are being supported by the examples. For instances, you wrote that, "for energy supply, reduction of fossil fuels and application of renewable energy can be helpful". It is not preceded by or followed up with a general idea behind such actions. In my opinion, what should precede this sentence should be, "Institutes and industrial entities can help ease global warming by taking actions within themselves." Something along these lines. Generally, i feel your entry is blatant listing of what was written in the provided lecture slides. What i suggest is that when you summarize Dr. Sovacool's lecture, instead of listing what he said, grasp the underlying idea behind his lecture first. After which it would be exponentially easier for you to summarize his lecture.