Thanks for the comment Senlin. Regarding the contradiction you mentioned, I was trying to bring out the difficulties in carrying them out, notably the political impasse and difficulties in execution. They are susposed to act like a counter point. Perhaps that acted as a distraction, I will cancel them out.
You are right regarding the structure, my first point is its effectiveness and second is its practicality. As for the part about repetition of effectiveness, it is partly due to the difficulty in seperating the two concepts, as practicality justifies the expectation for its effectiveness. Perhaps I can make it clearer.
Thats all, Thanks for the comment!
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