DEAR Nicodemus, I have read your comment on my essay and I find it to be unique. I agree with you that the issues discussed are in line with what the authors are writing in the article. The sentence that you are unable to understand is actually a mistake of mine in the essay. That sentence was actually a fragment hence you could not understand it. There is in fact no link between India and the USA in this example. They are actually two separate examples. I apologize for the confusion caused. I believe that your point about giving a rough idea about the points discussed in the essay is a good and valid point. Hence I would be roughly stating my points of argument in the final draft.
I disagree with you about not discussing the gist about the authors arguments as I have stated my points clearly before stating all the examples I have used. I agree that I have used many examples in this essay and the reason being I was doing research to get more in touch about what the article is talking about.
Thank you very much for your comments and I will use them to work on my final draft.
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