Dearest Sanjeet Singh
I have read your comments and agree with you completely. The reason why my essay is unclear is due to the fact that i did not understand what the question was asking for and what the article was about. Now that i have a deeper understanding of what is required of me, coupled with your advice, I will be able to get my final draft done. I will go on to use 2 completely different arguments. With my newfound knowledge of the article, I can use the correct arguments and justify why the authors say so. Firstly is that ecosystems have the ability to remove carbon from the environment and that it is easier, less expensive and least dangerous by using ecosystems to reduce carbon. With these 2 arguments, my new look essay will be able to answer what the question is asking for. Thank you very much for the advice and review. I will work on my final draft.
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